A pale ray of sun

The weather refuses to improve yet, and we are treated to endless rain and waterlogged grass. So I took refuge in poetry, and I would like to share this poem by Louis MacNeice, which evokes the ephemeral pleasures of life. It is lyrical and sad, exploring themes of time, memory and loss.

I particularly like MacNeice’s mastery of the poetic form in the poem’s distinctive rhyme scheme and rhythm. The poet was anxious about the darkening political situation evolving in Europe at the outbreak of the Spanish Civil War and he evokes a sense of impending destruction. The allusions are vague and a modern reader can surely adapt them to his or her own experience.

Detail of JMW Turner’s painting, The Sun Rising over water (1825-30)

So, without more ado, here it is.

The Sunlight on the Garden

The sunlight on the garden

Hardens and grows cold,

We cannot cage the minute

Within its nets of gold;

When all is told

We cannot beg for pardon.

Our freedom as free lances

Advances towards its end;

The earth compels, upon it

Sonnets and birds descend;

And soon, my friend,

We shall have no time for dances.

The sky was good for flying

Defying the church bells

And every evil iron

Siren and what it tells:

The earth compels,

We are dying, Egypt, dying

And not expecting pardon,

Hardened in heart anew,

But glad to have sat under

Thunder and rain with you,

And grateful too

For sunlight on the garden.

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Author: M. L. Kappa

I’m an artist and writer based on a farm in Normandy, France, where we breed horses with my husband.

3 thoughts on “A pale ray of sun”

  1. The way things are going, I can easily relate to that poem, Marina. Add in rain every day since the first of January, and I cannot shake the feeling that it is approaching ‘The end of days’.

    Best wishes, Pete.

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  2. As WordPress is making me sign in for every comment, I’m giving up and posting as anonymous with my name attached! Of course, I tnen don’t get notified of replies!

    Louis MacNiece is one of my favourite poets. I haven’t come across this one, though. I love it.

    Vivienne

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